listen to the rain mix
into the strain
of music
.
this new- that goes
against the old
pounding rhythm
drum beat
heart beat
chop beat
half beat whole beet
eat beets!
eat and fill yourself
stuffing full of music and
purple rhythm, like a bird
one human turkey stuffed with
tempo
this Fat bird
lying here stuffed and waiting
to be plucked and
scalded
can't move away
there is only sound
pulsing in weird times
like American Berserk
and Americana coffee is in the veins-
like vines moving
you are addictive//addicted
united caffeine states
moving always
stuffed chock full
and moving
twitching
pinned to the wall
listening to the
rhythms work against each
other inside
the music is still mixing
with rain drugs
leaving no room
for anything but.
only a strange beat
rhythm fighting
keeping tempo
and here we are
going mad
screaming out silence
because you are afraid
to stop the rhythm
because music is
going. going. gone.
soon only
drip.
drip.
of rain without
rhythm













Comments
a fun read,
smooth flow,
well done.
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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
i like the way it sounds out loud. i'll have to read it for you sometime.
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Check out my poetry:
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The categories of optimism and pessimism do not exist for me. I am a prisoner of hope. I am going to die with hope. -Cornell West
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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
i read it out loud (i always do that when reading poetry) and you actually go faster-slower, unintentionally.
you get cool points for that (;
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Walking the streets
Tasting the heat
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Check out my poetry:
[link]
The categories of optimism and pessimism do not exist for me. I am a prisoner of hope. I am going to die with hope. -Cornell West
the more cool points for you, the better. i'm feeling generous today (;
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Walking the streets
Tasting the heat
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